Inspirational Alchemy

Coming up with good, fleshed-out story ideas can be hard. Looking back at the manuscripts I’ve produced over the last year, there is a wide range of varying quality among them — and a range that can be attributed to several things.

First of all, careful craft is probably the biggest make-or-break variable in my work. I have a dangerous, downright suicidal tendency to rush through from the middle toward the end in a marathon of keys-a-blazin’ writing. I usually end up with a shit ending — and, moreover — a shit story.

But my craft is a long way off from getting me to the point where I feel comfortable sharing my drafting process. And in truth, it’s pretty linear and straightforward. I sit down, crank some rock n’ roll music, and write like crazy. Pretty crude method.

This past weekend, it occured to me that the deadline (December 31) is fast approaching for the next Writers of the Future contest quarter. I’ve had a couple of zany ideas percolating upstairs, but not any that I think are necessarily right for the contest (ones that, however, I’m pretty excited about anyway — stuff Apex, Strange Horizons, or Ideomancer might love).

What reminded me of the deadline? Well, a couple things, but put simply: inspiration.

It’s pretty obvious how one can go about getting inspired to write, or even for a specific story, but what happens when you mix some of those ideas? For me, a certain magic happened this weekend (and even the past couple of days, in a more critical sense), because I allowed for the proper conditions. Friday (or was it Thursday?) night I finished reading Joe Hill’s Heart-Shaped Box. The book was incredible. But…it put me in kind of a funk. The thing about really good books is, they can scare you away from writing. They remind beginners that we’ve got a long road to travel. But it did, fortunately, leave me feeling inspired. It made me want to write, but not horror. I haven’t written SF in a while, so that’s what I felt I should write.

Then Saturday, I went and watched my cousins’ black metal band, A Hill to Die Upon. They blew my mind.

That experience put me in foreign territory in a lot of ways. For one, I don’t typically listen to that sort of music. I like heavy, but they take the brutality of it all to new heights. And they’re phenomenal at it. Also, the scene that I ventured into was different. A cold, dank industrial basement at the old local armory, where the army used to store their Humvees, tanks, and cannons. Badass environment. The place was littered with cozy furniture and vending machines that were so utterly out-of-place as to look surreal. Young adults, teenagers, people of varying ages swarmed the place — all just wanting to hear the music. And participate in a peculiar activity called “raging.” Stand the fuck out of the way when that crap begins. Or you might get trampled to death.

Then I spent a different night leafing through a certain book for inspiration: Spectrum 17, a book of the year’s best in contemporary SF and fantasy art. Holy cow, it’s incredible how much it gets the mind bubbling.

Add to that a whimsical hour-long trip to Barnes & Noble (in a massive Christmas-season shopping mall filled with zombie-esque Americans) and TGI Friday’s (nom!), a couple days of reading Paolo Bacigalupi’s The Windup Girl and Pump Six and Other Stories, along with Tobias S. Buckell’s short story “Waiting for the Zephyr” in John Joseph Adams’ Wastelands, and you’ve got yourself enough inspiration to cause your skull to expand like a balloon.

This much random stimulation, this combination of different experiences (all sensory, and all different in terms of what senses they stimulate), creates a kind of growing cloud in the mind. Carries you to a new fucking place. Fuels the imagination, invigorates, gives you something new to talk — or write — about. The savage nature of the death metal music (bought the CD, so I could continue exploring it), the apocalyptic tales of Bacigalupi and the J. J. Adams book, the shuffling, half-miserable forms of the Christmas shoppers, and the stunningly magnificent artwork to be found in Spectrum 17 – it all coalesces.

It all sets a kind of stage, forms an atmosphere from which to craft a story, a glimmer of fantastic life (in a less-than-fantastic world, in many ways), and a universe of dreams from which to build.

Try something different. Make new friends. Watch that movie you’ve always wanted to see, but haven’t. Read your favorite authors’ early stories. Listen to music you don’t think you’ll like. Go someplace far away, just because your girlfriend (or boyfriend, friend, random stranger) says it might be fun. Observe the world. Combine it all, a world and its inhabitants will suggest itself.

And then, of course, the work begins.

4 comments

  1. Lisa Wood

    Wonder if that how all good books are written – by experiencing life in a different way? Stepping out of your comfort zone and trying new adventures? Sounds different, not sure about heavy metal music….
    Cheers
    Lisa

  2. Annie Bellet

    I just ordered a bunch of the Spectrum books through my library since they look super cool :)

    Writing in a blaze isn’t necessarily bad. Don’t second guess yourself too much. Just keep writing and working on the things you feel you need to work on.

  3. Michael Hodges

    Good stuff, Alex. I enjoyed reading it.

    I tend to write the way you do – frenetic with loud and dramatic rock music (Pink Floyd, King Crimson, M83, etc). I also drink lots of coffee. Sometimes I look back at my first drafts and wonder what the hell I was thinking. Fortunately, the important parts get on paper – the characters, the emotion, the story. Clarity comes in revision. Even Hemingway said “the first draft of anything is shit.”

    One thing I’m starting to learn is that clarity is important, but story is king. My best stories come from dreams or fears. I’m writing about what I know and what is real. I think readers pick up on this. I keep a notepad next to my bed so I can write down any dream snippets. We forget them so quickly.

    On the opposite side of the point you made about a great book scaring you from writing, I’m reading a book that is making me think “I can do better than this”. I’m having trouble getting through it and may dump it. The author is describing up to five objects a room, getting into every character’s head, and just dragging what should be a crisp 250 page book into 400 pages. There are other issues, but what I deem to be boring may be exciting to others. I’ve been spoiled by Cormac McCarthy’s The Road. Just tell the story. :)

  4. Alex J. Kane

    Michael, good to hear from you.

    I am a huge fan of Floyd — and they are especially perfect for SF writing. Every time I watch a film like Blade Runner, I think they should have done the soundtrack (even though the soundtrack is already phenomenal).

    One thing I’m trying for the very first time, with my latest project, is to outline every single aspect of the story as best I can before I ever write. I’m writing a near(ish)-future, science fiction thriller set in a post-cyberpunk, post-apocalyptic Japan. Not only is the story itself probably one of the most complex I’ve ever tried, but I’ll also be doing a lot of research to prepare for it. By outlining the story as completely as possible beforehand, I hope to balance out the speed vs. clarity issue. For me, research is less about filling the story with fun facts for a cheesy sense of realism, but rather more about just getting comfortable with writing about a setting that’s completely foreign. Hopefully I succeed to some degree.

    Haven’t read McCarthy yet, but I hear great things about The Road.

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